Sunday, November 28, 2004

Possible Thriller/Horror Movie Storyline

Set initially in a Boston area mall. A remake of Groundhog Day combined with an update of “Charley on the MTA” .

Charley sitting on a bench on one of the crossways over the mall, second level. Every time someone walks by, the floor shakes. Charley starts to get up to meet his friends and the floor splits open.

He falls down, blacks out, wakes later in the mall sitting on the same bench.

But wait a minute? Didn’t he just fall? No, the bench is solid, the floor shakes when someone walks by but that is all. Where is he? Is he in the same mall?

He can’t tell. The stores are all the same. He sits down puzzling about it and falls again.

He keeps sitting, he keeps falling, he keeps finding himself in a mall but he can’t tell where he is.

They are all the SAME! He finally realizes that the kiosk with the sport memories is the only store that gives him a clue where he is because of what sports team stuff is for sale.

Can’t reveal the ending, it is too horrible! How would you end this? Would you even go with it?

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